Business Concept Statement

We had to write a Business Concept Statement for homework, and as I re-read mine, I'm beginning to re-think it quite a bit. But for now it reads...

I would like to create a a community arts program for public school children so that they get to experience the arts in their everyday school life. There are not many programs like this in the South, therefore I think this is why a program such as this is needed. Having the arts integrated into their education will allow children to experience a deeper level of learning. A program such as this will be convenient because children will be offered so many opportunities while in school that parents would usually have to put their child in after school activities for them to experience.